Writing for the Web:
Guidelines for MIT LibrariesTry fragments
Space is always at a premium.
- Complete sentences are not always necessary.
- Distinguish between:
- fragments - coherent phrases
- telegraphic writing - leaving out words like "a" and "the"
- Telegraphic writing may be OK in navigation, but avoid it in text. It doesn't save time because the user has to mentally put the little words back in.
Fragments - yes: More fun in the great outdoors! The thrill of adventure. The beauty of nature. The exhilaration of your favorite outdoor sports.
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Telegraphic writing - no: User gets receipt in e-mail message when pays with credit card.